Trailer- Audience feedback

Social Media audience feedback
I used social media websites Twitter and Facebook to gain audience feedback about the first drafts of the trailer.

From this comment we are considering altering the audio levels to have more emphasis on the teachers voice. We could also extend the length of time the teacher is shown on the screen in the first shot.

 

We are going to cut the length of Jessie and Sarah walking out of shot, this ensures the viewers attention is kept on the screen, continuing with conventions of trailers- which short and snappy shots.

After several comments on the music we are considering changing the audio we use to ensure that the narrative of the trailer is shown, ensuring the audiences attention is no longer on the music track behind it.